critique my myspace page...

[jlr12584]

www.myspace.com/jlr12584

i just made this page tell me what u guys think

 

[i am me]

its cool man but i think ur gonna get some heat for askin this

 

[crossboss]

good

What would be better would be better is "Not good looking".

 

[pressure0354]

um i know the other two said it good, but i think it needs work. example, maybe smile in a picture or two, don't take yourself so seriously, and relax instead of trying too hard to be a hard a$$.

i feel like im watching some lame wanna be model.

 

[KingBeef]

my personal opinion is it's not bad....but you need more pics of girls and female friends....too many guy friends make you give somewhat of a semi-gay vibe

 

[i am me]

well he jus made it, hell get more friends

 

[PowertripII]

Are you sure you're straight?

 

[Kings_royalty]

my personal opinion is it's not bad....but you need more pics of girls and female friends....too many guy friends make you give somewhat of a semi-gay vibe

I agree, get more pics of yourself with girls hanging out at the beach, bar, or club. Get rid of the pretty sunset and the music, you want something a little more edgy. And the zack morris thing, get rid of that quickly. The waterfall pic, MUST go. The pic in the black shirt was cool.

 

[Jenkies]

I didn't realize myspace was this big of a deal

 

[AlexTheGreat]

[threadjack]

what about mine? www.myspace.com/trp_alex

i chose the "simple and slick" profile, tell me what you think

[/threadjack]

 

[Scorched]

Buddy who started this thread goes to a university where myspace isn't really used as much as Facebook is... He shouldn't stress myspace... but yeah... i agree, some of the pics look gay...

 

[TxCowboy]

Did yall see the picture in the comment section posted by " PinkieMcQUeen" ? ... I think she hit it dead on ....

- Check it

 

[realsmoothie]

"God I'm beautiful"?!?!?!? Yikes

And the hard music/soft photography isn't a good mix.

 

[Gangster Of Love]

Too much specific info about yourself. Sounds like your questions that you answer are the typical "interview" types. Leaves no mystery.

 

[jack knife]

www.myspace.com/jlr12584

i just made this page tell me what u guys think

I don't myspace anymore but when I did I had a few rules.

A) no surveys
B) only action photos (no posing)
C) no blogging (unless they were purely humor)

 

[DasaniWater]

Hey, just be yourself, and if personality comes out to be gay on profile then just accept it.

 

[jlr12584]

and if i happen to meet you dasani, i'll just kick ur ass and accept it.

 

[Kings_royalty]

[threadjack]

what about mine? www.myspace.com/trp_alex

i chose the "simple and slick" profile, tell me what you think

[/threadjack]

Looks good, a little plain though. Throw a funky background into it, like flames or some sort of abstract art. You can find some really good wallpapers at deviantart.com.

I like what you wrote in the 'who I would like to meet' section. It doesn't give everything away; it makes the reader want to know more...nice.

The pics look good, but get rid of one of the close up shots; one close up pic is enough.

I give you a B+, lol.

 

[Scorched]

holy ****, you guys are giving solid tips! I'm loving this advice...

 

[TESV]

you got the

Gay Abercrombie Wannabee vibe runnin rampant through your @##&$*(. You have got to be joking here!!!!!

www.myspace.com/jlr12584

i just made this page tell me what u guys think