critique my myspace page...
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Its the area he lives in. One of the top 10 richest countys in the states... He went to a private school in high school... A very exspensive school... He won't be kicking anyone's ass unless daddy paid for martial arts too...TESV said:
its true... im not gonna get shot walking out the door where i live. but just because i dont wear fubu or clothes 6 sizes too large on me doesnt make me gay. maybe if you stopped acting like ur such a wigger badass u'd be an okay person.
Dude, you crack me up. You're arms are not big at all! You wouldn't scare a freaking fly. I may be a keyboard jockey, just as much as you, but I guarantee you hardly anyone would be afraid of the likes of you if they saw you on the street. Before you act so arrogant, you need to acquire something to act arrogant about. Put about three more inches on your arms and then I might think twice about saying something to you.
BTW, WTF is up with the "I'm too sexy" song on your page. That is just wrong in so many ways. You need to revamp your page quickly.
BTW, WTF is up with the "I'm too sexy" song on your page. That is just wrong in so many ways. You need to revamp your page quickly.
Gangster Of Love
Master Don Juan
Dude, that song's gotta go. It would be funny if it was some fat guy being sarcastic, but your ad gives every indication you're really trying to be "too sexy."
Gangster Of Love
Master Don Juan
jlr12584 said:
Dude, just telling you, you are tryin' waayyyy to hard to be "Sexy", just let it be. That is the first impression anybody gets. Your pics, your captions, your "I'm so much smarter than everyone else", "You will you had my body" shtick, etc. It is coming across as you takin' yourself too serious. Women are a lot better at smelling this.
You sound very uptight and like a guy who, while might havea lot going for yourself, is not very interesting (BORING!!!!). Don't take it personal, Just offering you some advice, since you posted here asking for feedback.
Also, your question/answer section is not necessary, and will only hurt you.
Opinions/ Thoughts
037. Aborption? against
038. Gay rights? against
039. Violence in the media? for
040. Micheal Jackson? i hate
041. Aids? i hate
People ready don't care for that stuff, and will actually hold it against you. They will judged you, prematurely. Unless, off course, you order yourself a mail order bride who will be totally submisive and cater to all your needs and beliefs, and who will never dare have her own independent thoughts. People here are right, this has to be a joke, or you're just a troll.
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2 points:
1) More armpit shots - you have phenomenal armpits, son. Show them off. Women will get so aroused at the sight of your armpits that they will go on dates with you and make love to you afterwards!!
2) You shouldn't be proud of the fact that you don't read.
1) More armpit shots - you have phenomenal armpits, son. Show them off. Women will get so aroused at the sight of your armpits that they will go on dates with you and make love to you afterwards!!
2) You shouldn't be proud of the fact that you don't read.
donjuanjovi
Senior Don Juan
If I were you I would drop the whole "I'm metro, I love my body and so do you even though I'm scronny but I think I'm huge because I stare at myself in the mirror all day" look, and throw in some pics of you changing your oil, or chopping down a tree.