BannedGod
Senior Don Juan
I'm not pretending to be a DJ by this post, I still consider myself an AFC, but I'm working real hard on that
Anyways I used to write LAME and really bad poetry for a girl I was gaga about. Here's an example:
Gilded moon, golden lakes
Ethereal dawn, lavender skies,
Such are the wonders and splendours of nature,
Humbly surpassed by the beauty of this angel.
Her eyes, brighter then thousand stars,
Infernal, yet divine, holding
The wonders of twilight and aurora,
Guide my ship through this celestial darkness.
Eternal shadows, shed by light, brought by naught
But a simple, yet enthralling smile
Bewitches my mind with the siren's promise
Of a crystalline heaven which I hold so near.
Her hair, of a treacherous beauty,
More mystifying then cloudless thunderstorms,
Brings men weeping to their knees in awe,
Turning children into heroes and men into cowards.
Her glorious silhouette, eternal sculpture
Of diamond, unaltered by time and weather,
Everlasting proof of her beauty, powerful enough
To bring back the departed from the grave.
Humbling beauty brings me to soar,
On pearlescent wings forever high,
Bringing me to the Zenith, to a realm
Holding the beauties of exquisite Eden.
Damn that poem is so badly written it's not even human. I donnu what the **** I was thinking back then. Worse part is, I'm a guy that appreciates good poetry... How could I even write this piece of trash is beyond me...
What about you guys?
Anyways I used to write LAME and really bad poetry for a girl I was gaga about. Here's an example:
Gilded moon, golden lakes
Ethereal dawn, lavender skies,
Such are the wonders and splendours of nature,
Humbly surpassed by the beauty of this angel.
Her eyes, brighter then thousand stars,
Infernal, yet divine, holding
The wonders of twilight and aurora,
Guide my ship through this celestial darkness.
Eternal shadows, shed by light, brought by naught
But a simple, yet enthralling smile
Bewitches my mind with the siren's promise
Of a crystalline heaven which I hold so near.
Her hair, of a treacherous beauty,
More mystifying then cloudless thunderstorms,
Brings men weeping to their knees in awe,
Turning children into heroes and men into cowards.
Her glorious silhouette, eternal sculpture
Of diamond, unaltered by time and weather,
Everlasting proof of her beauty, powerful enough
To bring back the departed from the grave.
Humbling beauty brings me to soar,
On pearlescent wings forever high,
Bringing me to the Zenith, to a realm
Holding the beauties of exquisite Eden.
Damn that poem is so badly written it's not even human. I donnu what the **** I was thinking back then. Worse part is, I'm a guy that appreciates good poetry... How could I even write this piece of trash is beyond me...
What about you guys?