And why are you here again, Casino? How could you possibly not be a pure natural looking like that? I know looks aren't everything, but you would have to have -1000 game to not pull looking like that.
I think it is fine, but its too over the top. The silly ghetto thug stuff sounds fakey and kinda poser-ish. Honestly, if you just post your pics and a normal profile that doesn't have any glaring AFCism, you will do awesome. You ARE turning a lot of women off with what you are writing...I don't care what Style or anyone else says.
Measures like Style took are intended for those who cannot rely on their looks online to pull. Most people screen on looks online (as you have little else you can judge) and the ******* method is meant to grab the attention of someone who would otherwise thing you are a goofy looking dork. You are one of the lucky few who can pull (and a LOT) based on looks alone. I would drop the act.