ThunderMaverick said:
Are you saying that's not me?
Ok it is you.
Hows it going so far?
Though in all honesty i'd change some of those pictures too, get a group photo up with you enjoying yourself with some mates, i.e a holiday shot - some where it looks like your having fun - i.e showing your a fun guy to be around.
Get a picture up with you smiling, the moody look is all well and good, but it looks like you take yourself way to seriously, find a balance.
A picture with you dressed up for a night out wont go amiss also, so a girl can see what she is getting if you take her out - now a suit would be over-kill, but trendy, casual cloths that increase your profile wont hurt one bit.
Take the picture off, with you at the bar and your hair flicked like some cheesy shampoo advert.
Your not a bad looking guy, but if you want some honest advice!
Instead of focusing on PoF, i'd suggest you try to bulk up a little, your very skinny, fat chick's love skinny guys - they could be a staple diet for guys with your frame, but who wants them? I'd suggest getting on a bulk diet and doing some serious workout, that is if your really serious about increasing your chances in the dating game.
I'm not sure if the hair suits you also, i'd suggest it to be cropped, cut shorter, something trendy - It looks too grundge for my liking and i dont think it suits your style or your face.
Maybe a little more than you wanted, but if you really want to see results you need to put the work in and it's clear where you can improve, rather easily, to increase your odds.
Edit-
Look at this guys profile compared to yours.
http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=11093447
The differences are pritty evident, this guy is genuine, good pictures up, looks like he is what he says he is - It's not try hard, in fact he seems to be operating on the assumption that he is the prize, the catch, the way he writes it.
The difference is paramount, now ask yourself a question, if an attractive, confident girl with options visited his profile or yours, who would she choose?
His he better looking? He's simply put up better pictures!
Dont you have anything similier, cant you change your profile to be more like yourself, in the same sort of theme this guy as done.
Take note of the shopping list he posted about 'HIS' choice in women. Your's is absent of a similier sort of list, it's not a bad profile, but it's not personel, it lacks anything of substance, it's just fake tag on, something like a cut and paste job of someone elses ideals - it has no soul, it lacks and genuine sense of self.
Now why not change it to be about you, take out the geek references (final fantasy), remove gaming references and sell yourself - Put yourself in the best positive light, tell people what your looking for, dont be ashamed to state what you want in a women - women like to know you wont just stick your dcik in anything - make them feel like your only posting to them because they have a certain quality that seperates her from the usual run of the mill and your not simply interacting with her because she has a fan*y.
The profile is ok - nothing wrong with it, but it's not the best you can do, it tells nothing about you, it's simply like a band aid, very much like most PUA advice is - there just training wheels - take them off, become more alpha, in your post -
Now I'm not a big believer in alpha and beta, but one can see the diffences a mile off - on one hand we have a genuine make no apologie profile which states the type of women he wants, keeps it minimul and to the point, on the other hand we have you using any form of template that doesn't even reflect who you are, to try to secure a date!
Why not post something up on here about a better more personel profile and we'll dismantle it and reword it, try to think of your inner male core and remove the geek shi* i.e gaming.
You can borrow stuff from the one suggested to you, the part about the romance novel stuff is good, but why not change it, make it more personel, add your own personel flair to it -
Your lack of personel flair, shows me you lack substance and soul, where is your personality?
Further Edit -
A couple of good starters:
Hiking,
Voice over for Anime - I'd exand on it - Japanese cartoons, I'm looking at it as a stepping stone to move onto bigger things (get the womens 'provider' hamster spinning, you dont have to be well off you just have to appear that you have the potential to not be a bum - i.e if your in a shi* job expand in it, working behind a bar - glorify it, I get to meet new and interesting people and it can be a riot sometimes, it's a nice none stressful stop gap to bigger things - Make even the negatives sound postive, sell yourself, sales and marketing)
