Hey people! please review my POF profile. thanks!

[Asterisk]

Yeah, I already know i need more pics, as I only have two right now,
but other than that, how is it so far?

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=47781897

Constructive criticism would be appreciated. Thank you.

 

[Naughty Ninja]

Yeah, I already know i need more pics, as I only have two right now,
but other than that, how is it so far?

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=47781897

Constructive criticism would be appreciated. Thank you.

You're joking right?


No comment.

 

[Asterisk]

ok, ninja, I'll bite. what's wrong with it?
go ahead and flame me. give me your worst!

 

[Asterisk]

seriously, give me a laundry list of things i need to fix!

 

[zinc4]

Yeah, I already know i need more pics, as I only have two right now,
but other than that, how is it so far?

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=47781897

Constructive criticism would be appreciated. Thank you.

Is this a new Napoleon Dynamite character?

Sorry if that sounds mean...but when a woman looks at that, she will think mean things as well.

The pics need to be changed....old jeans with a chain..that may be your style but you could at least lose them in the pics...and your profile content reeks of trying to be Mr. nice guy...you are acting like a white knight...but the biggest things are the pics...try to get some better ones.

 

[Asterisk]

Napoleon Dynamite?!?!?! I hated that movie!
are you saying my profile is boring?
what can I do to spice it up?

 

[Naughty Ninja]

what can I do to spice it up?

Spice it up by deleting your profile permanently and restraining yourself from even entertaining the thought of putting a new one up.

No chick wants to be fvcked by Jesus. Unless she's Linda Blair. Trolllololol.

 

[Asterisk]

now we're getting somewhere! white knight huh?
what parts specifically are white knightish?
as for the pics what would you suggest?
ninja, i know i said give me your worst, but i was joking....
give me something i can use.

 

[pdx1138]

read Naughty Ninjas other posts about POF profiles.

then apply the described technique.

 

[Asterisk]

thank you pdx.
already read ninja's post, that's where i got the idea.
i'm doing what i can, but if i didn't need help,
i wouldn't be at sosuave in the first place.
now i'm looking for ways to tweak my profile so it looks good.
but, i need more specifics......

 

[zinc4]

for starters, you can't even see what your face looks like...you need more desirable looking pics...as far as being white knightish...you talk about how much of a gentleman you are and all of this and the whole poking war thing is strange sounding although i know what you are talking about...do you even mention what kind of woman you are looking for or what is your type? also need to make it more fun sounding.....lose the talking about yourself in the nice guy way crap...it just doesn't come off good...but change the pictures above all...your messages are all going straight to the delete box i can bet before they even read what you wrote....are you actually getting many responses with this from decent looking girls???

 

[Asterisk]

actually, i haven't sent out any messages yet.
i figured i would just set it up and then tweak it 'till it looks good
get it reviewed and fine tune it before i do anything with it
bounce ideas off the djs here and see what i can do.
i just set up yesterday.

 

[Asterisk]

Yeah, I already know i need more pics, as I only have two right now,
but other than that, how is it so far?

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=47781897

Constructive criticism would be appreciated. Thank you.

made a couple changes nothing too drastic
check it out tell me what you guys think

 

[evan12]

the middle pic make you fake remove it .
your "I dont bite " mean no girl is messaging you , remove this head line

 

[Asterisk]

how does it make me look fake?

 

[EuropePUA]

I don't see what is wrong with his profile,

hes a typical 80s kind of metal guy.

In the 80s everyone looked like him.

So what is the problem?

 

[d!ckmojo]

I don't see what is wrong with his profile,

hes a typical 80s kind of metal guy.

In the 80s everyone looked like him.

So what is the problem?

Umm, maybe the fact that its not the 80's anymore? Its the twenty-teens~

I'm getting into the real preppy look these days. I think that is going to be the next really hip fashion style for men.

check out www.trashness.com

 

[EuropePUA]

OP, have you tried sarging at heavy metal concerts?

Go to a Metallica concert and work your game there,

those metal chicks with 50 piercings in their lip and dyed black hair would totally dig you.

 

[Asterisk]

Somebody actually gets my style!
EuropePUA, you make a good point about demographics,
I mostly attract goth chicks, punk chicks, and juggalettes.
for some reason everybody thinks I'm a juggalo....
unfortunately, don't have money to travel the states...
so i guess i'll have to search the net for metal concerts in my area.
but yeah, i was born in the 80s, so it suits me just fine.
i still need more pics though.
what else can do to make my profile better?

 

[EuropePUA]

Somebody actually gets my style!
EuropePUA, you make a good point about demographics,
I mostly attract goth chicks, punk chicks, and juggalettes.
for some reason everybody thinks I'm a juggalo....
unfortunately, don't have money to travel the states...
so i guess i'll have to search the net for metal concerts in my area.
but yeah, i was born in the 80s, so it suits me just fine.
i still need more pics though.
what else can do to make my profile better?

Chicks really dig White guys,

You have to make it obvious in your profile that you are "white".

Instead of the username "Gamble4tacos", change it to

"WhiteGuy4You"

Dude if I was a white guy like you I would be pimping.

Unfortunately I am not white, so there will be no pimping for me.

You must get girls all the time. Be honest now?