Oh, dear. This one could take me a while to go over. Here's a summary: it kind of sucks. I'll go over it by the chapter, so you can see why I say that.
Chapter 1: So far, so good. I agree with pretty much everything there. Nothing too groundbreaking or earth-shattering, but not bad.
Chapter 2: I can't decide what I think of this chapter. On one hand, this sort of knowledge is very useful for creating a strong frame of you screening the girl. On the other hand, it seems kind of introverted, and you never talk directly about using this stuff to screen with.
Chapter 3: Okay, I personally think you're overstating the relative importance of physical attributes. In my mind, there's inner game (how you feel about yourself) and outer game (how well you use that to your advantage), and neither of these are that strongly affected by the physical aspect of things. Of course, I'm pretty sure there have been several threads on that subject on this board already, so I can't claim to have the "right" answer on this. Personal opinion only.
As for "being unique", I should point out that if you don't already have a firm grasp of interpersonal dynamics down, you might wind up shooting yourself in the foot with this. You haven't actually gone over what would be a good or bad way, for instance, to "draw attention to this unique trait of yours" (paraphrasing), so it would be easy to botch.
Everything from "show her respect" to "make her laugh" is AFC logic, and it sounds like you listened to a girl (or girls) when they tell you what the really want. This is why David DeAngelo's frame is useful. It teases her, pushes her away playfully, and doesn't give an inch. In comparision, your frame seems all about how to give women what they want. If you do that, it's impossible for them to be attracted to you.
Chapter 4: This one's AFC logic the entire way through.
Don't gawk. This is the only one that has a modicum of sense, but not for the reason you think. First, what's wrong with paying attention to an aesthetically pleasing figure? You know she has it, SHE knows she has it, it's a moot point. Besides, if you're doing things right, you should be too busy talking to her (having successfully applied the 3 second rule) to stare at her.
Don't curse and swear: Doesn't really matter much either way, IMO. But you seem to be mostly concerned with being a "perfect gentleman". If you follow the rules given in your ebook, "perfect gentleman" quickly becomes "just friends".
Don't physically grab women. Oh, come on. Did you even read the posts about kino in the DJ bible? Of course you shouldn't grab her *inappropriately*, but you DO need to show her you're comfortable with your own physicality, otherwise it's another ticket to Friendsville.
Don't lie or betray her. This one's more of a morality issue than anything else, and really shouldn't be in a book about picking up women. Besides, check out the post about the "secret society" on bristol lair. Too lazy to find it myself, anybody mind linking to it?
Don't talk about other women. Why not? It can be useful for two reasons. One, you can use stories about women to describe yourself, what you expect from your women, and display social proof all in the same breath. Check out the ASF archives of the poster Zarathustra, you'll see what I mean. Again, it's all about how you frame it (the underlying meaning of the conversation).
Don't forget to shave. Again, this is more physical, and, as such, rather irrelevant (IMO).
Chapter 5: Everything looks good here. You gave me a couple places I hadn't thought of before, I'll have to try them out.
Chapter 6: You mention several complicated steps to tell if she wants you to approach or not. Except, how on earth does she even know if she wants you to? You haven't (at this point) given her anything to go on. Maybe if you were incredibly alpha-male before, she might give you some approach indicators, but the very act of waiting for IOIs before going in puts you in a beta position.
Besides, you're worrying way too much about what she does and how it affects you. "She looked at me! No, wait, she was looking at somebody else. Well, wait. Was that me, or him? Oh geez, I want to talk to her, but I can't tell if she likes me or not!"
Yeah. Not cool. I mentioned the 3sec rule earlier. Check it out, sounds like it would help your results.
She has already given you approval to approach her, now you have a chance to win her approval to see her again.
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Okay, screw it. I just looked at this one line that convinced me, beyond a shadow of a doubt, that you just don't get it. Right now, you're looking for her approval, and you have a weak frame. Women don't want guys like that. Women don't want needy, insecure, spineless men who need the woman to take charge. An alpha male is the proverbial leader of the pack. He's the one who decides things, takes charge, and makes the woman his. That's the sort of person women fall for, and the one line I read convinces me you're miles from that. Check out the DJ Bible, bristol lair, the fastseduction.com archives, anything. 'cause right now, you need the help. Later.
