Well you can either look at all the body-language and all the voice fluctuations and tonality and all the tangents he went off on talking about inane crap, or you can get straight to the point, which is that the OP clearly needs to get more comfortable around women. It seems to me he just needs to spend more time around them generally and not try anything special. He just sort of needs to probe and see what he can and cannot do around the ladies so that he'll be more confident in the future.
I'd say all he needs to do is study up on a few alpha male principles, like those in my signature for example, and just spend some more time around women and see what makes them tick. If he applies a few alpha male principles and hangs back I think they will flock to him. Right now it seems to me he's chasing and that way he is sort of scaring them away. It's clear from what he's said about the follow-up texts that he is chasing.
IMO all the Don Juan principles are wired together with 1 common thread and that's basically this: you want others to put their best foot forward because you are putting your best foot forward.
What most women do, is step back and see if you step foward some more, and then they step back again and the guy steps foward again. Now they're doing cat-string on the guy. I may be digressing but I think this is a solid point I'm making and that's that it all comes down to basics and that the OP should just forget about PUA material imo and get comfortable around chicks and drop all the canned material. Just observe them in their natural habitat and let them do their natural thing.