All advance players critique in summary form (real live game)

pornstar88

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read from the bottom too the the top and plz critique me. I know its only on yspace but this is how i talk to girls in real life and I wanna learn how to be a better player

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rhodes played a hell of a game and so did payton, where are you from

From: her

ha colts all the way foo! them interceptions were off the chain tho. but i didnt like how payton got mvp cuz rhodes or wateva had more yardage but its wateva.

From: me



I hope you watchn the super bowl and your goin for the Colts cuz because I dont like gurls that dont like football or the colts


From: her



yea as long as ur doin wat u wanna do its all gud


From: me



o i was gonna go there but I like art so much and I dont care about school to much


From: her


csu fort collins or cu boulder


From: me



this art institute donw in denver, what about you



From: her



me neither. im so tired of the high school scene. i got one mo year tho. wat college do u plan on goin to?


From: me



damn i cant wat for college

From: her



ha fa sho


From: me



lmao but yeah i have a girlfriend.And im not one of those dudes that would ever cheat on my girl. Its like of course i still have eyes but I dont want to ever disrespect her cuz i know she wouldnt do that to me


From: her



woah now i didnt wanna get wit cha now. i wuz juss askin a simple question. jeezo.


From: me



lol im just sayn you actually think you hot enough to get with me, and I already have a girl sorry, your pretty sexy though lol


From: her
Date: 03 Feb 2007, 08:32


ha if i didnt kno no betta, i think u r tryna get wit me

From: me



your right thats why I would be ya better half lol


From: her



oh i kno. i didnt expect that. the world would be so f'n gay if we were all the same.

From: me



o thats cool, nobody is the same


From: her



oh im like completely opposite of u cuz im always laughin smilin n talkin


From: me



cuz thats how am lol


From: her


y not?


From:me



u will prolly never know the real me not on here or anywhere else.


From: her



so ta get ta kno the real u, i can only get that on here?


From: me



im am pretty quiet but you are meetn the real me right now.


From:her



ha its wateva u say! lol. u look like an extra quiet person. i said hi ta u yesterday n u didnt say nuttin back


From: me



he was controln cuz he didnt want a nigga like me comin through and swoopn up his lil model chick


From: her



cuz he didnt like wat i did on new years n wouldnt let it go n i cnt be wit some1 who wnt let things go especially if it doesnt involve them in any way. n plus he wuz rly controlling


From: me



whyd you break up with him


From: her



no we broke up a while ago


From:me



you got a boyfriend thought right


From: her



nope


From: me



has anybody asked you to go with them yet
From: her



i dunno. if i get a gud enuff reason then i will


From: me
lol i am. U should go my nigga


From: her



cuz its bout ta be hella wack n no1 is rly goin.


From:me



y not


From: her



prolly not cuz im not even goin


From: me
Date: Jan 29, 2007 9:07 PM


you goin with a date

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From: her
Date: 29 Jan 2007, 18:50


i dunno prolly next week.

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From:me
Date: Jan 29, 2007 8:49 PM


when is winter ball

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From: her
Date: 29 Jan 2007, 18:43


ha its all gud.

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From: me
Date: Jan 29, 2007 8:38 PM


lol i kinda figured you would be in there pop lockn lol i didnt bump ya in school cuz i didnt want too. But im not afraid too

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From: her
Date: 29 Jan 2007, 18:24


haha yup

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From: me



i knew thats how you danced lol


From: her



haha yea fa sho


From: me



are you goin to let me grind lol


From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 20:32


juss wondering

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From:me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 10:30 PM


most likely y?

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 20:25


haha. smart one. r u goin ta winterball?

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From: me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 10:23 PM


well how you goin to serve me then...lol... oh you wanted to dance WITH me oh lol now i get it

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 20:20


HAHAHAHA NO.

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From: me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 10:07 PM


damn you act like you really got some skills, can you crump

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 20:04


ha ok i guess

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From: me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 10:01 PM


cuz i will serve you son

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 19:56


how u kno?

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From: me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 9:55 PM


cuz i can dance better than you

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 19:51


im 5'8" n hell yea. the club is ma 2nd home. y?

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From:me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 9:49 PM


fa sho lol how tall are you and do you like to dance

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 19:31


haha omg ur stupid. haha

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From: me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 9:29 PM


eh im just a squirrel trying to get a nut

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 19:23


uhhh...right....

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From: me
Date: Jan 28, 2007 9:22 PM


lol since your a model it will prolly be all in slow motion

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From: her
Date: 28 Jan 2007, 19:16


haha fa sho


From: me



yeah im not doin that thats a little obnoxious.. but i get the point if you see me you just bump into me or blow me a kiss


From: her

yea if i see u. i juss get caught up in conversations wit pplz that i dnt rly notice anyone else so if im talkin ta someone juss run inta me or sumtin


From: me



i dont know but I just got a really good feelin about it, are you gonna say hi to me tommorow or what


From: her


y?


From: me



lol...no im not rude kid, i cant wait fo school monday


From: her



how rude. ur mean


From:her



id rather be retarted than black and chinese lol im kiddin id hate being retarded. Would you rather be retarded or blck and chinese lol j/p


From: me



so wat u tryna say?


From:me


atleast im not blackanese


From: her



haha wow. ur retarded.


From: me



im black and 12% percent WHITE oh!!!!!


From:her



haha yea ur right im at a loss.


From: me



lol i was close, bet you cant guess what I am lol
dont just say im black cuz im more than just black i know you wont guess it. and i will even tell you my last name its Swain


From: her



haha wow. no im black n philipino haha


From: me



you look black and hawiaan, or puerto rican and maybe white lol cracker


From: her



ha very funny. no i came as me


From:me



who did you come as on picture day lol. scytzo lol


From: her



ha i dnt rly kno. it changes by each outfit. n it depends on wat kinda clothing it is n for wat category. n yes ill be sure ta do that


From: me



lol who are you in front of the camera, when you get a talk show like tyra make sure you invite me on iight

From: her



umm i made abt 300 dollas for a hair show. but i dunno i like both i guess. its like when ur in front of the camera ur anotha person n u dnt have ta be yourself as much but when ur on the runway its more attitude then anything


From: me



lol whats the most youve made for 1 show, nah im not some gurls like the feel of gettin dressed up in expensive clothes and some gurls would rather just wear baggy jeans, do you like the feelin of gettin dressed up or walkn across the stage or do you like the money

From: her



like 150 or higher. ha r u ma psychologist now? ha but uh it makes me feel gud. haha


From:me



how much do you make for like each show or job, how does modelin make ya feel

From: her



yea i do get paid. like i have ta go on model calls that ma agency tells me abt n if i get picked i go n do the job. n yea im an only child so i am kinda spoiled but not that much cuz ma daddys black n he'll snap on me quick if i pout or get attitude


From: me



do you get paid to model, and your parents just give you money for you to go shoppin lol lil rich spoiled kid huh lol j/m
 

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Someone tell me this thread isn't real. Please.

Dude, we can't be watching over every word you say. You'll never be confident and independent if you second-guess everything you say and do, and then come here and ask us if you did a good job. That's just not how it works.

This site is here to teach you the mindset of a DJ. You have to understand the game. Its up to you to come up with what to say.
 

pornstar88

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i dont do this all of the time I just wanted someone to critique this convo cuz its the best i have to offer right now and i wanna be better at the game
 

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It really, honestly, doesn't matter a whole lot WHAT you say. The real emphasis is on how and why you say it. Did you say whatever you said in that ungodly long post with confidence, while making some jokes and a little bit of ****iness? Then you're good to go.
 

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Pft screw that,

I got bored about half way.

But from the bottom half of it all, heres what i think:

First, you ask way too many fvcking questions! Mate, shut up!

Secondly, how old are you? I hate girls that don't use decent grammar online, and you both speak like you are 12.

Third, there's not much decent talk here, i found it boring, talk about something interesting, rather than bombarding her with lame questions. It's why i stopped before i even read to half way.
 
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