seloifter
Senior Don Juan
hahaha@oreo
I don't get why this is such a brilliant pick-up line...... it's like putting her on a pedestal isn't it?
How about adding a bit of neg-hit...... AND some of matrix's "hesitation neghit" thing or whatever it's called...... AND THEN finish it off with one of David D's pickup techniques
"excuse me j-lo - oh.... I'm sorry, from behind you kinda looked like jlo.... although from this angle it's pretty obvious that..... [pause for a second.... then smile] hey how about you give me your autograph anyway? [while she's writing name down] oh and put your number down there too"
There we go, I think that improves it quite a good bit.....
What this one does is it firsts sets it up like you're gonna give her a compliment, but then you almost take it back... and she's thinking "oh my god I can't believe he's going to do that to me!" then you catch her off-balance when you ask for her autograph.... meanwhile she's thinkin "what's goin on with this guy..... is he just trying a pickup line..... does he really think I look like jlo..... is he just trying to make me feel better after practically insulating me" blah blah blah and while she's wondering what you're up to you catch her off guard AGAIN when you ask for her number..... chances are her barriers will be down from teh confusion...... and you're in (or at least you have a much better chance at being in now)
Yours just put her up on a pedestal and made you sound like you'd just read a bad pick-up-line book......
I don't get why this is such a brilliant pick-up line...... it's like putting her on a pedestal isn't it?
How about adding a bit of neg-hit...... AND some of matrix's "hesitation neghit" thing or whatever it's called...... AND THEN finish it off with one of David D's pickup techniques
"excuse me j-lo - oh.... I'm sorry, from behind you kinda looked like jlo.... although from this angle it's pretty obvious that..... [pause for a second.... then smile] hey how about you give me your autograph anyway? [while she's writing name down] oh and put your number down there too"
There we go, I think that improves it quite a good bit.....
What this one does is it firsts sets it up like you're gonna give her a compliment, but then you almost take it back... and she's thinking "oh my god I can't believe he's going to do that to me!" then you catch her off-balance when you ask for her autograph.... meanwhile she's thinkin "what's goin on with this guy..... is he just trying a pickup line..... does he really think I look like jlo..... is he just trying to make me feel better after practically insulating me" blah blah blah and while she's wondering what you're up to you catch her off guard AGAIN when you ask for her number..... chances are her barriers will be down from teh confusion...... and you're in (or at least you have a much better chance at being in now)
Yours just put her up on a pedestal and made you sound like you'd just read a bad pick-up-line book......