Writing

[Mizer]

I was wondering what you fellas think about using poetry as a way to draw in females you already have interested in you. It would be, of course, of the sexual nature but not blatantly so. I tend to write poetry a lot but usually keep it to myself or someone who can critique it well but I am considering using it to my advantage in the dating arena. So, is it to none DJ to you fellas or what?


Mize

 

[Starman]

I'll tell you from experience..I don't write poems, but I know alot of women who have guys write them poems..The really cultured educated women enjoy it..

The ditzy HB's think its immasculine..but if its poetic erotica..women love it..they love reading erotica

 

[Trapspringer]

"The ditzy HB's think its immasculine"


How did you come to this idea?


Trapspringer

 

[Starman]

Like I said , I know a few HB's who have had AFC's write them poems..they would say "Look at the dork who just wrote me this poem"

or "God this guy is obsessed with me writing me these poems!"

incidently..one of the guys she called the dork for writing her a poem..got laid by her..but she still told me he is dorky..and not interested in him.

women..

 

[Mizer]

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ncidently..one of the guys she called the dork for writing her a poem..got laid by her..but she still told me he is dorky..and not interested in him.

I wonder if this guy wrote some roses are red violets are blue BS and wrote nothing about stuff that got her hot. If you get a chance, please ask. I need more insight on this. Any other opinions?


Mizer

 

[Starman]

The dorky guy wrote stuff like

You're smile is as sweet..
as the sun in arizona heat..

while another guy wrote unrhyming stuff like

"Your face

A moon passing through and far

Aging beauty has never sought such grace"

they didnt like either..I read some of them..they showed me it..more to show off..then they would tell the guy they really enjoyed their writing..

 

[Mizer]

Yeah, that does sound kind of dorky.

 

[Starman]

ya know what Mizer..I have never really liked poems before..I still dont..

But I think you make a valid point ..that writing sensual/erotic poems is useful

why?

because the association the girl makes with the poem..the writer..and the feeling of arousal the poem creates in her

Men are visual creatures..thats why they like porn..women emotional..they like reading erotica better

So , yes I agree sensual poems might get you cookies..but sappy.."you're eyes are like stars" will make you look AFC

here is a poem I found on the net..I think I will send it to my girl and say I wrote it

ue beckons me to come around
Her cuckold husband sleeping sound
The coast is clear

Through the garage into the house
So quiet now as any mouse
I reach out for her

Sharing now adulterous kisses
In my ear now Susie hisses
"I'm dying for it"

Slowly down the hall we're creeping
Past the room where Jack is sleeping
We check him out

Jack is snoring on the bed
Sleepy have just been fed
We stand and spy

Sue nuzzles up and nips me
Grins wickedly while she unzips me
Watching him

I lift her skirt and Susie shivers
Parts her legs, she sighs and quivers
So soft so lovely

Down the hall into the study
She smiles and whispers "O.K. buddy"
And drops her skirt.

Overcome I grasp and lift her
Over me and slowly shift her
Down, impaled, enthralled

Walking thrusting to and fro
To his desk I quickly go
To set her on it

Sick with lust from weeks of waiting
All the days without it hating
Fiercely, frantically, ****ing

"Oh Jesus, yes, I love it so"
She's coming now and whispers low
Her love her lust to me.

Harder still I pound and ride her
Then overcome jet hard inside her
So sweet so wet so loved.

In a moment we recover
Smiling now "MMM Thank you lover"
She takes my hand

Down the hall we stop again
Touching kissing we both grin
As Jack sleeps on

Back to the kitchen by the door
We kiss and fondle a little more
I back her against the fridge

My desire rampant and demanding
I take her again hard and standing
My God so good so hot

We part with plans to meet
We kiss again so nice so sweet
Lovers in lust

 

[Mizer]

You see, Star, that was my whole thinking. The poems willl get her hot and she will then associate the erotic poem to you and will then have erotic thoughts of you after reading the poem. It can't be that ol' " your eyes are like jewels" s#it!
It has to be manly and sexual. I bet your lady friends wouldn't call the guy who sent her a poem like the one above a dork. Mine are evn more erotic. Well, I will have to test drive. If they think I am a dork, oh well, the weekend is coming up anyway.


Mizer

 

[Starman]

well, you have to be subtle about it..I know you are writing it for your lady friend..but if you are trying to mack a chick..she will call you on it..or think you are some pervert

oh those shmoes by the way are still writing these girls I know..at least 2-3 poems a week

 

[Mizer]

well, you have to be subtle about it..I know you are writing it for your lady friend..but if you are trying to mack a chick..she will call you on it..or think you are some pervert

Yeah, you have a point. It will have to be erotic but very subtle where they won't be able to exactly put a finger on any thing but can only speculate and feel. It willl be tricky. Maybe I should let one of my platonic female friends read it first and hopefully they won't throw themselves all over me. J/k.


Mizer

 

[Starman]

post one of your more subtle poems..lets check it out

 

[Toke]

The most AFC thing I've ever done in my life, was write a poem to a girl I really liked (who until then, had no clue).

Needless to say, she avoids me now. Havent even talked to her more than once in the last year.

The funny thing is, now that I have some experience, I know she obviously liked me before that. She always complimented me, touched me and smiled at me (she was usually nervous about most people).

If only I had known then what I know now...


But if you are already involved with this girl, it may be a good idea. Just dont put too much into it. Like if you make her think you're way more into her than she is into you, it might scare her off.

But thats my 2 cents, do with them what you wish.

 

[Starman]

you know whats funny..if the chick perceives you as a nerdy, goofy, AFC guy that wrote her a poem you are OUT of Business

If you are a cool, strong, usually unemotional guy..who wrote a poem..you would be the most sensitive thoughtful attractive guy

It all depends how the girl perceives you..and what the topic of the poem is and how you convey it