Which Tinder ' About me, Bio description' sounds more attractive to you?

[Travel memoir21]

Before I had - ' Don't let the cute good looks fool you, I'm badass, suave, cool motherfvcker ready to save the world from evil!;-)'

Now I changed it to - ' Lifelong bachelor here. I enjoy nice walks in the park and bbqs in the beach with friends and family. I love getting my coffee drink in my favorite cafe in the Weekends.'

I would get atleast one match a day with the original, then it stopped...lol man what's up with that? I guess I sounded more an @sshole or something. Anyways, I don't know man....Im fishing for more mature women so this is what I'll get.

 

[AmsterdamAssassin]

Seems like you don't know how women will perceive you. Let me help you out:

Before I had - ' Don't let the cute good looks fool you, I'm badass, suave, cool motherfvcker ready to save the world from evil!;-)'

"This is clearly written by a manchild"

Now I changed it to - ' Lifelong bachelor here. I enjoy nice walks in the park and bbqs in the beach with friends and family. I love getting my coffee drink in my favorite cafe in the Weekends.'

"This is clearly written by a senior citizen."

Im fishing for more mature women so this is what I'll get.

I guess now the 'senior citizen' bio makes sense.

 

[Travel memoir21]

Seems like you don't know how women will perceive you. Let me help you out:


"This is clearly written by a manchild"


"This is clearly written by a senior citizen."


I guess now the 'senior citizen' bio makes sense.

Okay dude...how would you write it to spicen it up more my age? 20 to late 30s

 

[sharkfinale]

Okay dude...how would you write it to spicen it up more my age? 20 to late 30s

Your age is in a range?

 

[Hamurabimbi]

Find a bio that fits how you look.

 

[Travel memoir21]

Find a bio that fits how you look.

At a coffee shop wearing Brown Blazers

 

[sharkfinale]

 

[Travel memoir21]

What it's casual...and it looks great in all seasons. I don't wear a tie and sometimes I wear it with Khaki pants and sandals

 

[sharkfinale]

What it's casual...and it looks great in all seasons. I don't wear a tie and sometimes I wear it with Khaki pants and sandals

By "look" @Hamurabimbi did not mean your clothes, but what archetype you project in your pictures.

 

[SW15]

The Before is better. What you changed it to comes off as far more beta.

I think doing in-person approaching is far better than anything you could do on a swipe app, unless you are 90th percentile + in looks.

 

[Travel memoir21]

The Before is better. What you changed it to comes off as far more beta.

I think doing in-person approaching is far better than anything you could do on a swipe app, unless you are 90th percentile + in looks.

Why do women digs Assh0les but raise their sons to become nice guy providers? That's messed up!

 

[AmsterdamAssassin]

Why do women digs Assh0les but raise their sons to become nice guy providers? That's messed up!

Women don't 'dig assh0les'. With that attitude, it's no wonder that you have no clue how to make a woman sit up and pay attention.

Most women are interested in men, when they act like men and not like mommy's little boy. Your momma raises you one way, but you have to disengage from the way you've been raised and only keep the positive aspects and keep the negative aspects as 'learning fee'.

 

[Hamurabimbi]

By "look" @Hamurabimbi did not mean your clothes, but what archetype you project in your pictures.

For example. I’m told I look like a ‘pervy porn star’. So. A bio that said something like: ‘Looking for a soulmate to take long walks on the beach with. And share fun times at local brewpubs.’.
I rather used something like: ‘Looking to hangout and have a fun time.’.

 

[SW15]

Why do women digs Assh0les but raise their sons to become nice guy providers? That's messed up!

That's a great question and I wish I had a better answer for it.

It is messed up.

I was primarily raised by my mother and she raised me as the typical beta male nice guy provider type. As I reached sexual maturity in my teen years, I discovered that the traits I was raised with were not valued by the young women that I desired. This was a tough lesson to learn in high school and even into the early part of college. In freshman year of college, I started to take steps to kill the nice guy and to re-make myself as a more desirable male.

Being raised as a beta nice guy wasn't my only problem in my early years in the sexual marketplace. As I entered high school, I was still shorter than most girls. I lost the first 1.5-2 years of high school just on this alone. By the time junior year started, I was taller than most females and I topped off at 5'10" around the end of my junior year of high school. I also had to deal with multiple childhood relocations and trying to fit in as "the new kid in school" multiple times before the end of high school.

The steps that I had to take to kill the nice guy were challenging. I started reading internet articles and books in the 2000s by people like David DeAngelo and other 2000s era PUAs. I was also reading sex technique manuals about how to be good at sex once I lured the woman back through pickup.

You might have had to go through some steps yourself to reverse the negative training you received from your mother to be a nice guy.

Nice guys finish last.

 

[Travel memoir21]

Okay, how would you guys express my love for taking walks at Parks and going to coffee shops in a cool way and not sounding like a Senior Citizen.....can you give me some examples?

 

[BackInTheGame78]

Ask ChatGPT

 

[Divorced w 3]

Less is more, let your photos do the talking

 

[Travel memoir21]

' Chilin in Parks and finding the coolest coffee spots around town are my weekend jams. If you're into spontaneous park picnics or hunting down hidden coffee gems, let's vibe !'

lol....sounds a lot better. Thanks ChatGpt....or do you think girls can spot the bs?

 

[AmsterdamAssassin]

' Chilin in Parks and finding the coolest coffee spots around town are my weekend jams. If you're into spontaneous park picnics or hunting down hidden coffee gems, let's vibe !'

If you want to use that, don't add that second sentence. I'd add something like 'Join me', but repeating the first sentence in the second sentence sounds too needy / OCD.

 

[Travel memoir21]

Lol....now I'm asking ChatGPT...a buncha conspiracy theories questions...haha