The plight of Men v Women Dating in The Western World

Isildur1

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Wrote the article to discuss the advantages and disadvantages for men and women in the modern dating world - while most men in the manosphere believe that women hold all the cards i'd put out some other views to balance out why this may not necessarily be the case all the time - although i tend to agree women seem to have the upper hand in nearly every aspect of the modern era of dating. - Couldn't post the whole article here as it was too long .
 

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That was a cat herd. A formless soup of an article. Fluff everyone here knows with no edge, without the decency to even attempt any kind of a conclusion. A listicle with no balls.

You have to find an angle that's unique and joust with it.

2.7/10
 

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Just wanna leave some constructive advice if you want your writing to be taken seriously - you need to proofread this; excessive spacing, improper grammar, incorrect spelling ("San Fransisco" in only the 2nd sentence), wrongful capitalization/lowercase of proper nouns - even your name at the bottom suffers from this as "Darren PUa".

You can download Grammarly which serves as a free Google Chrome extension, which I highly recommend if you care about how your readers perceive this.

Additionally, the articles on your homepage have dark brown title font against a dark green background, making them very hard to read without mousing over the text to highlight it.

I don't have an opinion on the article itself because I stopped reading rather quickly due to the aforementioned hurdles.
 

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I don't have an opinion on the article itself because I stopped reading rather quickly due to the aforementioned hurdles.
That's too bad, it's groundbreaking material.
 

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Wrote the article to discuss the advantages and disadvantages for men and women in the modern dating world - while most men in the manosphere believe that women hold all the cards i'd put out some other views to balance out why this may not necessarily be the case all the time - although i tend to agree women seem to have the upper hand in nearly every aspect of the modern era of dating. - Couldn't post the whole article here as it was too long .
I never care for you guys that come here and promote your website. Just post your thoughts here.

With that being said, most of what you posted has been going on for years. The main difference is the current crop of men lack a lot of masculinity. More so than generations before. I've seen it creep into SS as I've been here many years.

If a guy wants to get girls, its still possible. He can improve his position or sit in front of his computer and complain. Most don't want to put the work in.
 

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Wrote the article to discuss the advantages and disadvantages for men and women in the modern dating world - while most men in the manosphere believe that women hold all the cards i'd put out some other views to balance out why this may not necessarily be the case all the time - although i tend to agree women seem to have the upper hand in nearly every aspect of the modern era of dating. - Couldn't post the whole article here as it was too long .
Tripe.
 
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