Seems a bit... uhm... typical. There's nothing in there that makes you stand out.
Stating your own qualities like "I am very laid back" means you have a judgmental personality. The whole spelling and grammar thing also isn't impressive. But I'm sure you'll attract some 14 year old girls desperately searching for a 'cool' boyfriend. :-/
Uhm... you're not very smooth. Even if I had to meet a guy friend from myspace I'd like to see some consistency. It's attractive when people know what they want. Don't try and be funny by telling people what celebs you wanna meet. That's stupid. Rather just be honest and say what you like, and don't like in a person. Once again, no judging. Rather say: "I prefer people who are comfortable socially" instead of saying: "I like peeps when they can be laid back".
Get my drift? Your profile makes you look 14-16. (No offense to all you younger chaps out there, btw.) Be a bit more serious, and a bit more funny. Throw in a joke here and there - but make sure the whole thing isn't a joke. Uhm, yea.
