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[amnbyrd]

http://www.myspace.com/loudmouthrevolver

 

[sparky0000]

Looking good . I like that pic of you riding that bronco naked. I am feelin' it.

 

[foomee]

haha very nice. i like the layout, but there's a few too many pics of you and your car... try limiting it down to 2 or 3 good ones.

 

[Wyldfire]

Stephen King is practically my neighbor...his house is very cool. Huge red Victorian with a black wrought iron fence around it...with bats. He's very connected to the community...has a radio station here, built a park...gave the town the "BAT Bus"...a cool looking red public bus line with a HUGE black bat across it. I see him around town all the time...and he LOVES Quiznos Subs.

I noticed you like him a lot so thought I'd share that.

 

[92 GSR-4]

Ha ha. Pretty decent profile. So your into GM muscle....yet theres an "Import Tuner" in the bathroom... interesting.

 

[L777]

I'd change the music man....it offends my ears!!

Apart from that, cool, especially the car!! Where I'm from its just inconceivable to have a car like that at 19.

 

[Crank_It_Up]

I'd change the color of the text or the background behind the text, you have such little contrast it makes it hard to read.

 

[bearfan34201]

Stephen King is practically my neighbor...his house is very cool. Huge red Victorian with a black wrought iron fence around it...with bats. He's very connected to the community...has a radio station here, built a park...gave the town the "BAT Bus"...a cool looking red public bus line with a HUGE black bat across it. I see him around town all the time...and he LOVES Quiznos Subs.

I noticed you like him a lot so thought I'd share that.

I love Stephen King. Right now I'm on the 5th Dark Tower series book and reading Insomnia. I finished Salems Lot a few months ago and thought that was excellent. But thats so cool he sounds like a good guy.


Dude you are worrying about your myspace too much. Mines simple and sweet. You don't need to over dramatize the thing. I have pictures of me at parties or something not me next to my car and my arms folded. Not trying to sound like a ****.